[閒聊] 穿越第一人稱雷文....
自從開始看原創後,看了不少第一人稱的穿越文...
起先覺得蠻新鮮的,後來越看越覺得怎麼一大堆都是小白自戀文。= =
尤其是那種有一堆花架子男主男配圍繞著女主風花雪月、要死要活的文章...
唉...用第一人稱去寫的視野有限,YY的程度直達噁心...
其他的雷文標準:
1. 小白女主鄙視古人的智慧,自以為了不起,老是把別人當白痴....
2. 在有權勢的皇帝、皇子、公主面前不敬、口出狂言還沾沾自喜...
(作者大神忽略合理性,正常情況女主早被拖出去挨板子或斬了.....)
3. 扮男裝就想逛妓院,口口聲聲尊重女權,遇到青樓女子就調戲,自以為
高人一等...巨噁心 =--=
4. 一堆正事不幹只會圍繞白目女主的花架子男角
5. 把男主形容成「美人」...(看了很想扔磚)
6. 穿來古代說要低調,作的事卻相反的女主。
7. 故作清高,實際卻像一隻花蝴蝶穿梭在男人間跟人耍曖昧的女主...
8. 老是在花架子男角們面前唱現代歌,吟別人的詩當作自己的....
(雷啊...男角們聽不懂歌還會嘲笑人家土...讓我懷疑作者的年紀...)
9. 族繁不及備載
結論:第一人稱穿越文真的真的有大部份都會雷的人頭昏眼花= =
哈哈,我大家會不會覺得我太嚴苛了?XD
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