[題目] 這樣造句可以嗎？

看板TOEIC作者 (小6)時間7年前 (2018/04/29 12:34), 編輯推噓10(10推 0噓 15→)
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雜誌要我用以下兩個詞造句 我試著造句，請教有哪裡需要修改或不通順的地方。 1.house 做動詞 This box houses a gift I will give my gf for a proposal. 2.of the time 造句 我感覺用的時機是在前面有提到過去的事，後面才可以用 of the time? Although I don't have enough money to buy a fancy gift for my girl, I have the affection to her like the acient romantic poet of the time. 請批改 謝謝各位大大 -- Sent by PTTNOW from my Redmi Note 4 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 27.52.230.108 ※ 文章網址: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/TOEIC/M.1524976479.A.5CD.html
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04/30 18:31, 7年前 , 1F
第一句ok , 文法有小錯誤
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04/30 18:35, 7年前 , 2F
This box houses a gift (which, that) I will giv
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e "to" my girlfriend for a proposal.
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04/30 18:37, 7年前 , 4F
which/that省略，但少了間接受詞前的介系詞 “to”
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04/30 18:39, 7年前 , 5F
原 po 這兩句造句是相連的上下文嗎
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04/30 18:44, 7年前 , 6F
“of the time” 是 “當代的” (for the time bei
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04/30 18:44, 7年前 , 7F
ng)的意思, 除非文章脈絡是過去，才有“當時的” (
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04/30 18:44, 7年前 , 8F
at that time, back then)的意味
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04/30 18:48, 7年前 , 9F
但你的造句時間點是現在，語意和語用上不通，若依
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04/30 18:48, 7年前 , 10F
照原句無法使用 “of the time”, 頂多只能改寫成:
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04/30 18:54, 7年前 , 11F
Although I don't have enough money to buy a fan
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04/30 18:54, 7年前 , 12F
cy gift for my girlfriend, my affection for/ to
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04/30 18:54, 7年前 , 13F
words her can only be rendered by romantic poet
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04/30 18:54, 7年前 , 14F
s (/ in romantic poetry) in ancient times.
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04/30 18:57, 7年前 , 15F
如果原po 只是想用 “of the time”造句，不再侷限
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04/30 18:57, 7年前 , 16F
於girlfriend ，我的建議是改寫成:
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04/30 19:01, 7年前 , 17F
History refers to the social, economic, politic
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al and religious circumstances that existed in
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04/30 19:01, 7年前 , 19F
the past, detailing events of the time (from wh
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ich people of modern age draw lessons.)
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04/30 19:43, 7年前 , 21F
補充: Although I don't have enough money to buy
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a fancy gift for my girlfriend, my affection f
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or/towards her is comparable/ can be likened to
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04/30 19:43, 7年前 , 24F
the poetry composed by romantic poets in ancie
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nt times.
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