[其他] 請問這句英文的錯誤在哪?

看板TOEIC作者 (無敵干物女)時間14年前 (2009/10/31 01:40), 編輯推噓1(103)
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Inside this book talks about controversial things about Christianity. This book inside talks about controversial things about Christianity. 請問以上兩句的文法錯在哪? 打在word上一直出現綠線,說是fragment? 少了什麼東西嗎? 刪掉inside就正常了 有請高手指點,謝謝。 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 114.45.187.144

10/31 02:47, , 1F
inside the book, it talks about ....
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10/31 02:47, , 2F
第二個about 建議改成 of 會比較好
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10/31 02:49, , 3F
寫得太快忘記自己寫了兩次about,感謝指正!
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10/31 02:50, , 4F
其實我是寫around
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