[分享] 獨立寫作首段怎麼寫？ by J2
最近同學應該在網路上有看到一張圖，是一個多益的題目，疑似有時空旅人
出題，
題目是：
______ in Wuhan, China, the flu spread rapidly throughout the
country.
給了四個選項： A）Origin B) Originate C) Originated D) Originating
A, B兩個選項應該可以直接刪掉沒問題，但好多同學C跟D之間無法確定。
其實這題考的是分詞構句＋慣用語兩個點，也難怪很難選。
首先先說分詞構句部分，分詞ing還是ed看是主動還是被動，如果選C, 原本
的句子會變成the flu was originated in Wuhan, 但中文說起源於...英文
就是直接用originate這個字，是主動的用法，所以應該是the flu
originated in Wuhan,，原本的兩個句子是：
1) The flu originated in Wuhan.
2) The flu spread rapidly throughout the country.
兩個句子合在一起就變成了：
Originating in Wuhan, the flu spread rapidly throughout the
country.
這個問題對托福來說或許關聯性沒有很強，畢竟不考文法的選擇題，但是對
於獨立寫作來說，卻很實用喔！
我們來看怎麼把這種句型用在introduction首段！
假設一個題目是問政府該不該蓋核電廠，introduction可能可以這樣寫：
There have been numerous controversies concerning whether or not
the government should build the nuclear power plant. Recognizing
the importance of its ability to generate tremendous electricity
compared to any other power plants, I, however, maintain that the
government should not build the nuclear power plant because of the
following three reasons.
可以利用分詞構句的句型，表達「了解到核電廠發電量很大，但我還是覺得
政府不應該蓋核電廠，因為以下三個理由。」
這裡同學應該也可以發現到，這是英文作文首段很常用的方式，在表明自己
立場前，會先說反方的優點，簡單來說就是先贊成反方，在提出己方的論
點。
可以看一下其他不同網路文章的首段：
While work is widely viewed as the major source of stress for
Americans, new research shows that people have significantly lower
stress levels when they are at the office compared to their time
at home.
While the effect of human activity on the global climate is hotly
debated, physical signs of environmental change are all around us.
從上面兩篇文章的首段也不難看出，也都是習慣提出反方的論點，後面再加
上自己的看法。所以同學在寫introduction也可以把握這個原則，就能簡單
的寫出一個好的首段。
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People should take time to relax with hobbies or physical
activities that are very different from what they do at work.
如果立場是同意，那就要先提到反方的優點，也就是平常的興趣跟工作相關
的一個好處，例如：
There have been numerous controversies concerning whether or not
people should take time to relax with hobbies that are very
different from what they do at work. Recognizing the fact that
hobbies that are similar to work can improve people’s work
performance, I, however, maintain that people should choose
hobbies that are very different from work for the following three
reasons.
如果不確定自己寫的正不正確，歡迎同學來「陪你讀」時間免費諮詢！完全
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Cheers,
J2
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