[請益] 整合寫作模板求指教

看板TOEFL_iBT作者WarmDude (暖男)時間8年前 (2015/11/03 01:30)推噓7(7推 0噓 16→)

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以下是我的整合寫作模板, 想請各位先進幫忙看看是否有明顯的錯誤, 或是可以改進的地方, 非常謝謝~ The reading passage provides three points to claim that______ :列舉123. But the speaker thinks the reasons mentioned in the article aren't completely correct, offering several reasons to oppose the article. First of all, While the article claims that________, the speaker indicates that_____. He says that_________. As a result, the writer of the article _______ Second, According to the reading passage, __________________________. (In this case, __________). The lecturer, by contrast, suggests that The third reason is about ________. The reading material suggests that____. However, the lecturer refutes the idea. He mentions that______. Accordingly, it is obvious that____. 主動請問各位一個問題,像我第二、三段的開頭, First of all,while the......., the speaker indicates that....和 Second, According to the reading passage, the.... 這樣First 和 Second後面接複合句的用法,是正確的嗎?? ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 114.36.237.103 ※ 文章網址: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/TOEFL_iBT/M.1446485423.A.CCB.html

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