[請益] 讓步段的寫法
各位強者們,想請教獨立寫作的所謂讓步段.
以下兩種寫法,都可以嗎???
(我所寫的是五段式作文,並且習慣寫把第三段寫成讓步段)
以下舉例
題目：Governments should spend more money
in sponsoring arts than in athletics
態度:disagree
寫法一
Secondly, although some may say that [art的好處], [athletics的更好處]
寫法二
In contrary,some may mention that[art的好處].That is,[稍微解釋art的好處]
However,the statement leaves out some important factors.[athletics更好處]
一戰W拿24[G,G] 總分還差6分就達到我的標準,希望W能再衝25+
只剩下三周,目前針對想idea很有障礙,不知道強者們有無建議方法？
目前打算先把雞精先想過一次
先多謝好心人回答!
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