[亂吐]米原秀幸
亂吐第一篇
按你媽的米原秀幸,每次看你的漫畫都是
不錯的設定,不錯的中期,爆炸結尾
烙跑專家的魔王一瞬間被自己開發的機器喀掉
復仇鬼的魔王破壞了全世界,然後被主角開外掛收掉
海盜王的大魔王被大大魔王吃掉,大大魔王又被隨便解決掉
拜託你去練一練結尾收法再來!!不是有同伴(好像)死掉就叫壯烈
(還老是要死不死的,不然就是畫面一帶:原來死掉了!!)
要狗血,去跟富士鷹學學阿!!
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