[無言] 國中的教育不能等
先自我介紹一下....我只是個普通的國中班導....
每天都很歡樂的 帶著一群國一生=ˇ=
幫他們訂便當、小考等等..........
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今天出了一題短文題,想說來應應景ˊˇˋ
以下是題目:
一、試用背景介紹法寫一篇200字以內的短文,主題為「中秋節」
改作文時,看到了很多月餅和烤肉...也有鬼打牆的文章
ex今天的月亮好圓唷~到處傳來噗鼻的(非常詭異的錯字←)
烤肉香,聞得我口水流得滿地都是
(噁心死了..你不會用垂涎三尺唷...),
問了媽媽,原來今天是中秋節!!
(還要問阿...)
後來我看到桌上放了一盒月餅,問了媽媽,原來今天是中秋節!!
(阿你不是問過了~"~)
之後大家開始準備汽水、烤肉用具等,奶奶開始跟我們說很多故事,原來今天是中秋節啊!!
(你要提醒我幾次...)
也有毫無邏輯可言....
ex今天月亮好圓,所以今天是中秋節啊!!
(不對吧....)
改了半天,終於改到一篇文辭很美的文章、堪稱用心的文章。
讓為師感到非常感動.. 還使用了排比法=ˇ=只是改到最後讓我很無言..
今天是個月圓的日子,家家戶戶在這個時候,都會聚在一起,享受濃濃的秋意
(痾 濃濃的邱毅...這不是新聞的梗嗎!!不過也算是有應用啦)
孩子們開心的在一起玩耍、聽著爺爺奶奶的故事
(好溫馨=ˇ=)
情侶們甜蜜的牽著手、享受他們甜蜜時光
(好害羞=/////=)
大人們忙碌的翻著肉片、享受今晚的相聚
(排比出現拉!!)
老人們享受著他們僅存的歲月。
老人們享受著他們僅存的歲月。
老人們享受著他們僅存的歲月。
老人們享受著他們僅存的歲月。
老人們享受著他們僅存的歲月。
=口=!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
可以這樣對老人說嗎?可以嗎、可以嗎!!
難道他要跟他奶奶說:奶奶,你要好好享受你僅存的歲月唷~!^_<
所以,作文也是很重要的,還可以看出一個人的心思..科科
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