[Club] Timbrake

看板Sean作者 (timbrake)時間17年前 (2007/08/02 16:37), 編輯推噓11(11推 0噓 6→)
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【Sean's Club List】 ID：TIMBRAKE Female/Male：Female Career/School(optional)：NTUT Birthday：76/10/26 支持陳信安的時間：Since he tried to enter NBA,I pround of him. 說說自己對陳信安的看法： although he is not good as three years ago,but I still feel he is the top 1 in Taiwan,we can see a hope on him... now he try to help the team win not only by offense,but deffense.. he had been more and more smart! go sean go Taiwan -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 211.74.222.254
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08/02 16:56, , 1F
would u mind if i fix your sentences?
08/02 16:56, 1F
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08/02 16:57, , 2F
u r supposed to insert "be-v" after I cuz "proud" is adj
08/02 16:57, 2F
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08/02 16:59, , 3F
also,with using although u cannot leave "but" there.
08/02 16:59, 3F
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08/02 17:01, , 4F
你的since是當因為.還是自從?..要小心喔
08/02 17:01, 4F
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08/02 17:02, , 5F
可以不用過去完成式.你可以用現在完成式就好..
08/02 17:02, 5F
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08/02 17:05, , 6F
不過他今天的確是跟卡達的forlorn hope
08/02 17:05, 6F
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08/02 17:43, , 7F
討論起英文來了...XD
08/02 17:43, 7F
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08/02 18:36, , 8F
那是因為錯得太誇張了...= =
08/02 18:36, 8F
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08/02 18:40, , 9F
是還漫誇張的Orz
08/02 18:40, 9F
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08/02 19:58, , 10F
其實有點中式.建議你習慣口語althougs1+v1+o1,s2+v2+o2.
08/02 19:58, 10F
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08/02 19:59, , 11F
讓自己不要有習慣but在那裡就好
08/02 19:59, 11F
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08/03 00:41, , 12F
錯好多而且好誇張...= =
08/03 00:41, 12F
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08/03 00:55, , 13F
完了 我好幾年沒唸英文文法了 所以沒有感覺 XD
08/03 00:55, 13F
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08/03 11:55, , 14F
這樣好糗捏 其實可以講中文
08/03 11:55, 14F
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08/03 12:42, , 15F
not only but那裡不確定可不可以這樣寫.我不會這樣用是真的ꨠ
08/03 12:42, 15F
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08/03 14:57, , 16F
thanks^^
08/03 14:57, 16F
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08/06 11:25, , 17F
smarter and smarter...
08/06 11:25, 17F
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