[履歷] 新鮮人履歷求批(英文)
個人學經歷背景:淡江資管畢 116 MBA
欲應徵之職務:這份CL是我投實習時寫的 未來想走行銷相關工作
其實目前還沒畢業 所以根本連新鮮人都還不算
只是想先為未來作準備 看自己還不足哪裡
所以麻煩大家大力的批吧QQ~~謝謝
自傳履歷內容:
Dear Hiring Manager,
My name is XXX, Ryder is my nickname, and I am currently studying
for a MBA degree at National Cheng Kung University. Yahoo, the giant of the
internet, is the greatest company in the internet services industry. Yahoo
was established in 1995. The first website I visited was YAHOO.COM.TW. At
that time, I thought Yahoo liked a magic world. I could find anything I want
on Yahoo. Nowadays, Yahoo is not only a search website but also a life
assistant. Above all, I really love Yahoo so much and I am passionate about
internet and mobile marketing. That is why I am interested in pursuing a
Mobile Marketing Internship position at your firm, and have enclosed my
resume and background information below.
I am currently interning as a marketing assistant at ASUS Corporation. I have
been working closely with the senior marketing executive on several new
product promotion, planning the press conference, researching the market
trends and dealing with consumers’ feedbacks. In addition, I had chance to
learn what internet marketing is and how to promote the products through the
internet. The things impressed me the most is that I made a slogan for a
product and it was used on every posters and catalogs. Through this
experience, I have developed analytical skill and honed my knowledge of
marketing and communication skill.
I am an enthusiastic, pleasant and open-minded person. Therefore, my friends
usually described me as a good team player. I believe that teamwork is always
better than individual. And the reason I got good GPA is I am a quick
learner, especially the thing about computer and internet. Given my
experience in marketing and personality, I think I am a strong candidate. I
look forward to joining and contributing to your firm.
A copy of my resume is enclosed for your reference. I would appreciate an
opportunity to discuss my qualifications at your earliest convenience. I can
be reached at 0912-xxxooo or via email at oxoxox@hotmail.com. Thank you
for your time and consideration.
Yours faithfully,
XXX
Enclosure: Curriculum Vitae
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※ 文章網址: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/Salary/M.1434600074.A.A05.html
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謝謝大大 我也希望我有900 QQ
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我會提到Yahoo的歷史是想說明為什麼想爭取這個職位和加入這家公司
不過似乎寫偏了@@
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I thought (that) Yahoo liked a magic world.
請問這樣的子句用法錯了嗎@@? 請大大糾正我一下 謝謝> <
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謝謝大大的文法校正!
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其實我的CL會沒舉例 是因為我的CV有提到
附上CV連結:https://goo.gl/l9AiP5
不知道配合CV後 這份CL會不會好一點點 @@?
再麻煩大家指教指教 :)
※ 編輯: dragon0518 (59.127.157.37), 06/18/2015 15:59:49
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ok ... 我會再想想怎麼舉例 感謝大大!
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好XDD~~
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swot會不會太老梗呀? (純粹疑問@@)
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哈哈 就是Word內建的Times New Roman字體而已呀XD
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