[翻譯] Metallica - Enter Sandman

看板RockMetal作者coolfly (如腐敗入骨，如身居火宅)時間15年前 (2009/04/29 07:37)推噓24(24推 0噓 13→)

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不要賣我Load （老梗） Enter Sandman 進入睡夢註1 Metallica Say your prayers little one Don't forget my son To include everyone 現在進行祈禱吧，孩子別忘了，吾兒要為每個人禱告 I tuck you in, warm within Keep you free from sin 'Til the sandman he comes 我為你蓋上溫暖的棉被讓你不用擔心罪惡直到睡魔來訪 Sleep with one eye open Gripping your pillow tight 緊緊抓著你的枕頭獨睜隻眼而眠 Exit light Enter night Take my hand We're off to never-never land 離開光明進入黑夜握緊我的手我們就要前往夢奇地註2 Something's wrong, shut the light Heavy thoughts tonight And they aren't of Snow White 情況不對，關掉燈光今晚充滿沉重思緒它們可非純潔雪白 Dreams of war, dreams of liars Dreams of dragon's fire And of things that will bite, yeah 戰爭之夢，騙子之夢龍火之夢以及種種傷人事物，耶 Sleep with one eye open Gripping your pillow tight 緊緊抓著你的枕頭獨睜隻眼而眠 Exit light Enter night Take my hand We're off to never-never land 離開光明進入黑夜握緊我的手我們就要前往夢奇地 Now I lay me down to sleep Now I lay me down to sleep Pray the lord my soul to keep Pray the lord my soul to keep 眼下我正就枕而眠眼下我正就枕而眠求主保守我的靈魂求主保守我的靈魂 If I die before I wake If I die before I wake Pray the lord my soul to take Pray the lord my soul to take 若在醒前我便死去若在醒前我便死去求主收容我的靈魂求主收容我的靈魂 Hush little baby don't say a word And never mind that noise you heard It's just the beasts under your bed In your closet in your head 噓，小寶貝，一個字也別說千萬不要在意你聽到的騷動不過就是惡獸在你床底蠢蠢欲動在你衣櫃你腦海 Exit light Enter night Grain of sand 離開光明進入黑夜只要一粒細沙 Exit light Enter night Take my hand We're off to never-never land 離開光明進入黑夜握緊我的手我們就要前往夢奇地 Boo! Yeah yeah! 呼！耶！耶！ We're off to never-never land Take my hand We're off to never-never land Take my hand 我們就要前往夢奇地握緊我的手我們就要前往夢奇地握緊我的手 We're off to never-never land We're off to never-never land We're off to never-never land 我們就要前往夢奇地我們就要前往夢奇地我們就要前往夢奇地（高仕艷　譯）註1：Sandman（睡魔）是西方民間傳說中的精靈，他會朝孩子的眼中灑沙，讓他們進入夢鄉。註2：夢奇地（Never Land，或稱Never Never Land）是蘇格蘭作家詹姆斯．馬修．巴里（James Matthew Barrie）筆下著名童話故事《小飛俠（Peter Pan）》中，主人翁彼得潘所居住的世界。一般用來象徵永恆的童年或童心，永生不死，以及逃離現實。 -- Moi, Peiere Reviere, ayant egorge ma mere, ma soeur et mon frere…… -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 118.170.64.118

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04/29 07:43, , 1^F

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lordlpg

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其實是上色沒上好XD 已改

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AnthonyL

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人家也不要李肉的啦～> <bbb

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YesIamNot

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謝謝YesIamNot大的指教關於Sandman我有查一下傳說，大多是提到他灑砂讓小孩睡著而且通常是會帶來好夢的樣子（例如在The Chordettes的Mr. Sandman詞中就側向此面描寫）所以在這方面為避免過譯，就直接譯為「睡夢」了（原譯「沉睡」比較無法表達這層意思，我已改為「睡夢」）而由Enter Sandman的歌詞中提到睡著後要「前往夢奇地」來看似亦以也是當「睡夢」解釋較為適當，即在睡夢中暫時擺脫人世的罪惡災禍另，AC/DC早期的貝斯手Mark Evans也被團員取了Sandman這個綽號因為他一下子就能睡著所以我想這詞是蠻中性的^^

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T大不要欺負我啦XDDDD

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