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自從大學後就很少看小說
回想起來
以前常常看到一些很新穎很有趣的設定
卻因為作者寫作功力不夠深
讀起來很不順暢或是整個架構亂掉
最後草草結束甚至太監讓人覺得很可惜
隨意發
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※ 編輯: Tapelik (182.234.59.9), 12/10/2014 16:57:44
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