[心得] 霹靂編劇快寫不出有生命力的橋段了
這禮拜看到花非花的雙腳被砍斷
欲界雜魚送雙腳去給秦假仙的橋段
這一段戲碼感覺就像在寫程式一樣
照本宣科 一行一行的往下走
人物間的情感完全無法感受到他們的憤怒與哀慟
老實說 花非花的劇情就算不能排入目前的主線
但好歹也是牽扯了一系列的劇情要角在內
對於斷腿這樣嚴重的人質威脅
絲毫感受不到"發自內心真誠的怒吼" 的橋段
當然會有人說, 老秦已經發飆 嘶吼了, 葉阿公也已經感受驚慌
但認真去看一下 幾乎是罐頭式的在寫這些台詞 編寫這樣的情境
講難聽一點的 默塵音死的時候 其他人動作反應更是激烈到不行
已經看了25年以上的布袋戲了...
忽然覺得幼稚園的時候在路邊野台戲的忠孝節義 還刻畫的更深入人心
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