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看板NTU_TS作者 (一支飛翔的酒)時間19年前 (2006/12/03 03:40), 編輯推噓4(402)
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It is Good to Be Young 高三忠 7號 莊子嫻 Whenever I climb up on the top of the mountains, or whenever I enjoy in a trip or a feast. I feel that: ”It is good to be young” in my mind. Unlike elders, as a young, I can do everything that my willing is stick to. That’s just because I have not only more abounding energy but also stronger body than elders do. With a healthy body , I am capable of going to every corner on the world on my foot. What’s more, I am able to make endless dream come true with my determination step by step. Besides, I think “Young” is a representative of hope. For a young, world is a box full of unknown, and our youngs have a mission to open it. For me, I haven’t even find the key to the box. But I am not worried. Because I am still young, I still have lots of opportunities. As long as I have a will , there is a way. It is good to be young. We must have to j60521@yahoo.com.tw -- -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 202.178.238.160

12/03 04:45, , 1F
這篇的結尾??
12/03 04:45, 1F

12/03 14:04, , 2F
那小朋友不知道怎麼的...
12/03 14:04, 2F

12/03 15:45, , 3F
所以要直接就這樣改嗎?還是要叫他寫完?
12/03 15:45, 3F

12/03 15:55, , 4F
這小朋友錯很多,而且遣句也怪怪的
12/03 15:55, 4F

12/03 15:55, , 5F
得找個專業好人幫她改了XD
12/03 15:55, 5F

12/05 00:26, , 6F
這篇開頭不錯
12/05 00:26, 6F
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