[Presentation]comment from our guest judges

看板NTUISO作者時間16年前 (2007/12/20 00:46), 編輯推噓11(1101)
留言12則, 8人參與, 最新討論串1/1
ART -the beginning is a little confusing -good explanation -maybe your presentation is trying to present too much, however, the idea of having the grand father is good -don’t read cue cards -smooth transition between scenes -like the creativity in the presentation -the speeches are not memorized -should have more eye contact -kind of hared to hear some people -cute appearance of dindinn dongdon -videos used to introduce new topic, interesting -demonstration of yoyo is good -talking among selves when should face audience -reading off words FOOD&DRINK -skits poses -presentation as if serving introducing food -well-prepared/memorized -“judged” the food -tittles fo food presentations are nice -few grammatical errors -the nannies are cool -the main speaker should be more clearly -have some one check your speeches for grammar word usage issues -the flow of your presentation could be a little smoother (but good job, I like your performance) -well-prepared, would be better if not that nervous -a few grammatical errors in t e speech -very creative with the dish name FOLKS -informative presentation -reading off words -simple ppt, easier to pay attention -well-informed -some slides have too much info creamed on it -reading off slides(not fair that “narrator” is readingoff words when everyone else is memorize lines) -flow needs work -your topic is controversial eh? -what about a way to link the different part of your present? -American and Europe have bbs too> < -your should have given US an outline of what you would…. -good premonition (girl in front of the computer) -transition not smooth enough, some awkward moment, more preparation would make it better -power point very detailed and clear, but adding some pictures would make the power point more interesting HOLIDAY -fireworks! Ya! -monster chasing cute -showing instead of just telling good -make sure you can be seen when performing -you guys are funny -the monster was a little……. -I was save candy -this presentation was great -few grammatical errors -well memorized, very prepared -good illustration in the power point HISTORY&GEOGRAPHY -very well-prepared, speech well-memorized -too many word on slide, which makes presenter read off it too much and therefore no eye contact with audience -no note cards though so that’s good -good eye contact from some presenters -could be more creative with the power point -power point didn’t capture attention -thorough and detailed presentation on Taiwan -good eye contact and presentation skills -and person also has good interacts with audience -spelling problem INDUSTRY -very lively speech presentation -grammar can improve -outstanding slides -good transitions (story connects) -too many pictures of betel nut girls… -voice loud and audible -very creative, funny and interesting -capture audience’ attention -good transition between scenes -would be better if memorized the speech and not directly reading the power point -good try at a different topic -bicycles are pretty cool -awesome transitions!!! -you=cool! -- ※ 編輯: imsinyu 來自: 220.137.85.136 (12/20 00:59)

12/20 16:00, , 1F
too many pictures of betel nut girls…好好笑XDDDD
12/20 16:00, 1F

12/20 21:20, , 2F
push~~~everyone did a good job!
12/20 21:20, 2F

12/20 22:22, , 3F
yeah~sorry for my picture"s".
12/20 22:22, 3F

12/20 22:26, , 4F
I was so high that I can't stop finding those nasty.....
12/20 22:26, 4F

12/20 23:11, , 5F
I thought the pictures must be your collections.....
12/20 23:11, 5F

12/20 23:26, , 6F
Ithink soXD(shake hands with upstairs)
12/20 23:26, 6F

12/20 23:54, , 7F
No~you wrong~they now become my collections.
12/20 23:54, 7F

12/20 23:56, , 8F
文法錯成這樣 你還是趕快去修進階英文吧= =
12/20 23:56, 8F

12/21 00:56, , 9F
It's colloquialism. You don't understand!!
12/21 00:56, 9F

12/21 12:04, , 10F
應該是修初級英語...
12/21 12:04, 10F

12/21 23:03, , 11F
all of you did really well~that's awesome^^
12/21 23:03, 11F

12/22 23:48, , 12F
I wish i had been there!!!
12/22 23:48, 12F
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