[Presentation]comment from our guest judges
ART
-the beginning is a little confusing
-good explanation
-maybe your presentation is trying to present too much, however, the idea of having the grand father is good
-don’t read cue cards
-smooth transition between scenes
-like the creativity in the presentation
-the speeches are not memorized
-should have more eye contact
-kind of hared to hear some people
-cute appearance of dindinn dongdon
-videos used to introduce new topic, interesting
-demonstration of yoyo is good
-talking among selves when should face audience
-reading off words
FOOD&DRINK
-skits poses
-presentation as if serving introducing food
-well-prepared/memorized
-“judged” the food
-tittles fo food presentations are nice
-few grammatical errors
-the nannies are cool
-the main speaker should be more clearly
-have some one check your speeches for grammar word usage issues
-the flow of your presentation could be a little smoother (but good job, I like your performance)
-well-prepared, would be better if not that nervous
-a few grammatical errors in t e speech
-very creative with the dish name
FOLKS
-informative presentation
-reading off words
-simple ppt, easier to pay attention
-well-informed
-some slides have too much info creamed on it
-reading off slides(not fair that “narrator” is readingoff words when everyone else is memorize lines)
-flow needs work
-your topic is controversial eh?
-what about a way to link the different part of your present?
-American and Europe have bbs too> <
-your should have given US an outline of what you would….
-good premonition (girl in front of the computer)
-transition not smooth enough, some awkward moment, more preparation would make it better
-power point very detailed and clear, but adding some pictures would make the power point more interesting
HOLIDAY
-fireworks! Ya!
-monster chasing cute
-showing instead of just telling good
-make sure you can be seen when performing
-you guys are funny
-the monster was a little…….
-I was save candy
-this presentation was great
-few grammatical errors
-well memorized, very prepared
-good illustration in the power point
HISTORY&GEOGRAPHY
-very well-prepared, speech well-memorized
-too many word on slide, which makes presenter read off it too much and therefore no eye contact with audience
-no note cards though so that’s good
-good eye contact from some presenters
-could be more creative with the power point
-power point didn’t capture attention
-thorough and detailed presentation on Taiwan
-good eye contact and presentation skills
-and person also has good interacts with audience
-spelling problem
INDUSTRY
-very lively speech presentation
-grammar can improve
-outstanding slides
-good transitions (story connects)
-too many pictures of betel nut girls…
-voice loud and audible
-very creative, funny and interesting
-capture audience’ attention
-good transition between scenes
-would be better if memorized the speech and not directly reading the power point
-good try at a different topic
-bicycles are pretty cool
-awesome transitions!!!
-you=cool!
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※ 編輯: imsinyu 來自: 220.137.85.136 (12/20 00:59)
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