[聖誕] 臭癢人
〈臭癢人〉 南部‧有頭豬
飼料奶粉何時了？斗內剩多少。
肥宅昨夜又掛網，戰績不堪回首連敗中。
菁英實力應猶在，只是牌位改。
問癢能有幾多臭？恰似一頭黑髮沾豬油！
〈賞析〉
此詞藉著細數過去無數的光輝與描繪近期生活 道盡了臭癢腦袋破洞的過程
首句透過食物與奶粉 映照出臭癢初為人父的喜悅與現實拚搏的擔憂
承接上文 由二、三段的掛網連敗 點出知名實況主時不我予的辛酸
最後透過詰問的自問自答 寫出臭癢至今仍留在觀眾心中的無暇形象
此詞以景入情 由遠而近 字字句句將癢的內裡形外躍然紙上
刻劃出眾人S87的希冀
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