[聖誕] 新詩＜最拉風的聖誕節＞

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＜最拉風的聖誕節＞ ◎　雨颯 誰為隆寒的峽谷止癢？ 誰在臘月裡將每個小時釀藏？ 欲飲，卻醉 是你拉著風，凍起了冬天 是腩肚替你撞破了季節 碁積，杉比鄰 歷經三劫以後，誰揀起你的桶 轉眸回望 在那第九季裡的龐然，是古拉格斯的身影 ============================================================================== 先用隨便寫的範本搶個頭香 一人有兩次投稿機會哦，請大家好好利用 -- 胡適　不要隨便看見一個名人的名字，後面配一句話就認為這句話是他說的。 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 220.134.43.140 ※ 文章網址: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/LoL/M.1449769210.A.C9E.html
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癢心不累德
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樓下請給分
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碁積，杉比鄰
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版主帶頭發U質廢文囉~
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本篇的流水號為[聖誕001]，已收錄至tab文摘
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※ 編輯: rainnawind (220.134.43.140), 12/11/2015 01:46:35
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竟然自己搶頭香
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87分
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癢
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快笑死 我不會再說你是癢黑了
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NA水準
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你以為我會給推麻ˋˊ
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哈哈哈哈好詩XDDD
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我不信這出自NA之手
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太癢啦
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撞破了季節這句意義不明
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87分
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87分
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越看越癢
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87分 不能再高了
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87 分
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87分 不能再高了
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87分
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我評87分 樓下呢
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87分
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87分
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噓
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新詩 是你
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87分
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87分
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87分
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87分
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87分
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87
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推 人才
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覺得一樓超87 XD
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碁積，杉比鄰
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87分
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87分 太神啦
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87.87分
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87
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87分
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87分 不能再多惹
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1笑死XD我跪著讀
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碁積，杉比鄰XD
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好癢、好癢
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87分
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夠癢
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身為一個癢粉 我一定會給13分進步空間 我給87分
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87
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87
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滿分 87分
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好濕
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杉比鄰XDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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癢到爆
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87分
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87
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有１３分的進步空間
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87
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還我碁積 衫比鄰
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87分
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87分
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87
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