[請益] 新詩究竟該怎麼寫?
小的這次想投稿新詩,可是
看了之前得獎的作品,發現
自己寫得相當白話,而前面幾組得獎得作品
意境都很悠遠,文辭也是= ="
當下心中有一種感覺
國高中的教科書選的新詩都騙人(都寫得很白話啊!)
請問
新詩
到底該
怎麼寫= =
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