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看板Language作者 (知道了吧 !)時間12年前 (2011/09/29 09:09), 編輯推噓2(202)
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我來自一個大家庭,有 7 個兄弟姊妹,尤其逢年過節親友團聚時,經常吃飯開兩桌都 不夠,這樣的成長背景讓我從小就適應與各種人相處。 我的父親從事公務員,母親則是家管。父母對我們的教育相當民主,在相當的程 度內都願意給我們學習做決定的機會,並不會硬性規定要孩子照著他們規劃好的期待走。 父母對家人的投資從不吝惜,只要我們肯學習,都可以去嘗試;父母也從小就鼓勵我們廣 泛閱讀,極少限制我們閱讀書籍的種類,也養成我對各種領域的知識都涉獵的興趣。 出社會之後我開始了離家的生活,雖然父母對我的支持並沒有因為離家而減少, 但這樣的生活方式讓我養成自己解決問題的能力與習慣,也慢慢磨練出與他人相處所必需 的包容。 對於未來的工作,我希望有不斷接觸新事物、不斷學習的機會,在責任範圍內有充分的揮 灑空間,並在自我與社會價值上得到成長與啟發。 I come from a big family, seven brothers and sisters, especially the holidays, friends reunion, often eating two tables are not open, so that the growth of background I grew up with all kinds of people to adapt to get along. My father in the civil service, mother is housewife. Parents of our very democratic education, in a considerable extent are willing to give us the opportunity to learn to make decisions, and not mandatory according to the child they planned to look away. Parents never begrudge the family's investment, as long as we are willing to learn, you can try; parents from an early age to encourage our extensive reading, and very few limits the types of books we read, but also to develop my knowledge in the field are studied under a variety of interest. I started out after the home of social life, although my parents did not because of home support and reduced, but this way of life for me to develop their own problem-solving skills and habits, but also slowly to get along with others honed necessary for inclusion. For future work, I want to have constant contact with new things, learning opportunities, within the scope of responsibility have full sway, and self-worth and social growth and get inspired. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 111.252.120.194 ※ 編輯: cmkung 來自: 111.252.120.194 (09/29 10:59)

09/30 09:13, , 1F
吃飯開兩桌都不夠的英文,很詭異~~ 是吃飯,還是吃桌子?
09/30 09:13, 1F

09/30 22:52, , 2F
用連接詞連接句子,不要那麼多逗號
09/30 22:52, 2F

10/09 09:42, , 3F
文法錯誤太多
10/09 09:42, 3F

10/09 09:44, , 4F
有些用詞遣字很詭異
10/09 09:44, 4F
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