[問題] 可以幫我看看這份NOTICE嗎
最近想要找語言交換，決定到師大去貼單子!!
不過我的英文實在是不怎麼樣，
零零落落的拼了幾個句子，
想請版上的各位看看，需要修改的地方有哪些?!
感謝大家啦!!!!
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Look here!!!!
I have a wish......
Are you the one who can help me to make this wish come true?!
I want to improve my English ability,especially on conversation!
My English ability just like university students’average.
Please help me!!
I want to find a English native speaker,I can teach you Mandarin,too.
I am a girl , 24 years old.
If you were a girl , you can help me and you also want to learn Mandarin
Please tear note which under this notice and write a letter to me!!
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以上就是我想張貼的訊息內容
請各位指教了~
感激不盡阿!!!
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