[創作] 原來是狗,我還以為是時雨 【1】

看板KanColle作者 (知識麻田)時間8年前 (2016/06/18 14:13), 8年前編輯推噓4(231916)
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大淀:「提督,新船建好了哦~」 提督:「很好,來看看吧。」 到達工廠後,我點下「GET!」鈕,造艦箱打開散出一堆白煙,然後艦娘就出現了。 大淀:「阿,是時雨犬!恭喜你提督!」 犬?......原來是時雨阿,正好是我欠缺的艦娘,我走過去伸出手。 提督:「歡迎你時雨,我是這個鎮守府的提督,讓我們一起努力吧。」 時雨歪著頭看著我的手,然後開心地把手搭上我的手,那不是人類的握手方式。 時雨:「汪!」 嗯?!?!?!?!?!?! 《待續》 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 114.27.101.146 ※ 文章網址: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/KanColle/M.1466230429.A.185.html

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嗯?!?!?!?!?!?!
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蝦?!?!?!?!?!?!
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閱 87分
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咪?!?!?!?!?!?!
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這東西..未來可能會變成你的黑歷史desu..
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喵?!?!?!?!?!?!
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犬派的站出來!
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嗯?!?!?!?!?!?!
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U點短
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喵?!?!?!?!?!?!
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尊重 包容 友善
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嗯?!?!?!?!?!?!
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嗯?!?!?!?!?!?! 等等你們欺負長ID啦QQ
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寫完啊ㄇㄉ。
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才幾個字也待續
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嗯?!?!?!?!?!
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蛤(ノ゚ο゚)ノ
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為姊姊表達無比的憤怒 我該出來寫小說了嗎
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(′=ω=)說啥呢...
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提督只寫了序出來而已
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不要起爭議啦,等待續阿
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才幾個字也要待續?
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完美展現做什麼都搞砸的概念
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嗯?!?!?!?!?!?!
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(′・ω・‵)原來是廢文 還以為是創作
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有笑有推lol
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姆咪(′・ω・‵)
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/####\_=ω=)_姆咪—
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(* ' >д<)嗯?!?!?!?!?!?!
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這是挑戰百字小說創作大賽嗎www
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16p幣
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《待續》?!?!?!?!?!?!
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poi派站出來
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(′・ω・‵)
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挑戰百字小說大賽也不是這樣玩的,艮。
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我的字數跟鋪陳都還比較多啊啊啊
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嗯?!?!?!?!?!?!
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真的是有笑有推 這很明顯是自己跳坑阿
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越看越覺得是故意的,行數刻意控制在剛剛好一頁結束
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說不定真的是序之類的東西
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我時雨提督 我表示不悅
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廢到笑wwwwwww
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嗯?!?!?!?!?!?!
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幫補血 加油
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有續集來補血
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(*゜ー゜)a
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才不是補推呢
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有續集補血
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補血
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吶 還你推
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補個 有續集讚讚
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