[問題] 托福Writing格式是否適用雅思

看板IELTS作者henry2797 (熱血青年)時間8年前 (2015/12/09 23:54)推噓3(3推 0噓 30→)

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如題前陣子準備了托福(76分) 但因為一些考量決定轉戰雅思遇到一個比較困擾的問題是寫作換了一種寫法整個怪怪的無所適從目前是以OG準備看了解答的範文覺得很難寫出這樣的文章而且好像寫得很隨興想提什麼就提什麼..... 因為托福寫作主要分五段第一段破題第二三四段皆為支持段主要都會提出論點後舉例子說明第五段為結論段(之前托福有人特別警告我一句不成段，但看Simon的作文似乎都只有一句) 想請問的是雅思是否比較需要寫深並以各種角度寫(四段) 而非是舉三個論點來寫還是說其實用托福的架構(五段)寫也沒問題另外雅思有些題目會問到個人意見有些不會這是不是表示問個人意見的時候需要像托福有明確的選邊站呢 (同意/不同意或是選擇一個選項) 以下附上剛剛寫的OG第一篇希望大家可以給我一些建議下周六要考了.... 題目 Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organization. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Most people need to get a job after graduation from school. They often possess different perspectives on whether they should stick on a job for whole life. I would personally believe that work for more than only one organization is the better choice. To explain, I will give two reasons of it. One point which I consider to be absolutely vital is that it would be boring if one only has a kind of job experience. Take my father for an example, he is a policeman since he graduated from school for almost 40 years. Because the only thing he needs to do is routine work, he is extremely used to living with same schedule every day. To be specific, as an employee in the government in the government, he arrives at his office on eight o’clock and does many typing tasks that has not changed from the beginning to now. For the reason that my father has single experience about job, he does same things and has same skills for his whole working life. For most people, the kind of days is too stable and lack of variety. Nonetheless, getting rich experience of many companies would be more attractive and interesting for a person. My uncle is the most representative example for the condition. He has worked for five organization including small one and big one. He always can share many kinds of the practical events he used to face. Moreover, every time when he changes to another company, he moves to different place and enjoy his new life. Therefore, this kind of experience can definitely enrich one’s life. In sum, although there may be some dissenting viewpoints, I personally think have more experience in jobs would be a better choice. 謝謝大家 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 1.34.55.76 ※ 文章網址: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/IELTS/M.1449676447.A.BC8.html

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