Re: [徵求] WANTED! a speaking parner!
針對原PO的文法回應
※ 引述《winds6432 (小悠)》之銘言:
: Dear all,
: Hello, my name is Yuli.
: I finished the IELTS exam this Aug, and I only got 6.0 on speaking.
: I want to get 7.0 on next time when I take this exam again.
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有了next time, when後面都是多餘的
雖然這邊文法沒錯,但是很累贅
上面可以合成一句,少用一點"I"
My IELTS speaking examed this Aug was 6.0; however, I want 7.0 on next time.
: If you are the one who's grade is around 6.0 or higher, and also want to
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whose才對
另外,If開始的句子是條件子句,但是卻又出現一個對等連接詞and的句子而且沒有主詞
後面一個逗點又一個句子,請問主要句是甚麼???
如果please這句才是主要句,那and前面應該不能有逗點才可以共用同一個主詞you
: practice speaking, please sent me mail.
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send a
重寫一遍
If you have speaking grade around 6.0 or higher and want to practice,
please send me a mail.
: We can practice it on skype or face to face @ Jiji, Nantou.
: Thanks a lot!
: 大家好
: 不知道我上面的文法有沒有錯@@
: 有沒有人有興趣練習SPEAKING的?
: 如果你在南投集集的話,我們可以面對面練習
: 但是集集要考IELTS的人應該趨近於零吧@@
: 所以如果有SKYPE的話,可以和我一起練習嗎?
: 時間定在星期一到五的晚上十點到十一點
: 或是我們可以共同討論出適合的時間
: 謝謝
不過如果只是E-mail往來倒不用這麼龜毛...@@
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