[問題] 作文task1 結論問題!!請高手給意見!!
task1 在下多半花20分鐘寫,留大約35分鐘左右寫task2
這篇是其中一次的練習文章
主要是說韓國人的整形數據等等!!
在下想要問的是,請問有需要多花5分鐘寫結論嗎??
請問個位有寫結論嗎??
A glance at these two bar graphs reveals a number of cosmetic procedures
and specific types of surgery between male and female in Korea in 2004.
It is salient that the total number of the cosmetic surgery in female
outnumber in male. The largest number of procedures in female is Eyelid
surgery which is almost 320000. The most large number of surgery in male
is 60000 which is Hair Transplantation. On the other hand, the fewest number
of the cosmetic surgery among woman is the sort of Liposuction with the
total number about 120000. The most less number of the procedures
among man is the sort of Facelift with approximately 18000.
There are some coincidences between the two gender. Both man and woman like
to do the cosmetic surgery about Laser Skin Resurfacing and Rhinoplasty.
In comparison with these two types of surgery in two gender, and base
on the proportion of the two numbers of surgery, female is more like to do
the Rhinoplasty surgery. However,
male prefer to do the Laser Skin Resurfacing.
在下這周六就要上戰場了!!請個位前輩給點意見吧!!感謝!!!
作文task1 結論問題!!請高手給意見!!
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