Re: 碎星物語 (心得) -50章
內文爆雷,進度到50章
隨興亂寫
1. 這反差也太大了wwww
主角一開始像是碎星團的死對頭,再來看起來像是支持者(只是恨鐵不成鋼),
再來又隱約像是技術人員(改造江河鐘的人)...
都是煙霧彈啊!
溫家哥哥的本尊就是蘿莉控山叔叔!
(毒舌根本都是在自表www)
2. 開場沒多久被推下車的小女孩沒下文了
3. 看人物設定似乎龍家是三姊妹,除了青梅竹馬的大姊被人娶走(皇帝?),
剩下兩隻好像都會被蘿莉控主角拐走。
雖然小妹還沒登場不過文中好像有雲兒不小心誤植為靈兒的地方就是。
4. 不過以時間序來說,主角被龍家攆出去退婚應該在成為武神之前?
所以其實救雲兒的時間應該是在那之後了吧,
那其實當時應該是認得雲兒?
變身成山陸陵的設定有點像是白無忌,變身後就無口了,
平常超碎嘴這樣。
5. 承1,現在看蓋亞宣傳圖那張"哈!爺我就是任性" 會有種詐欺感!
6. 當年封神把人族各天階戰力一起埋進去的陰損主意該不會就是主角出的吧?
看起來像是肌肉男的角色其實才是軍師...
7. 冥界屍龍的名字感覺不太夠霸氣(不夠中二?)....
像是RPG打到一半會被隨手輾過去的中BOSS的感覺。
並列的另外那兩隻魔龍的名字好得多?
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