[閒聊] 老黃感覺短篇>>>長篇
老黃的作品也看了不少
感覺他營造某些橋段的時候頗精彩
但是寫長了就一堆重複的劇情、相似的人物、自我矛盾的bug
邊荒為人所詬病
但是花妖那一段很精彩
大唐被認為拖戲,尤其是塞外篇
但是寇仲斬殺竺法慶那場架是繼徐子陵擊殺席應之後另一高潮
安樂慘案/狼盜/大尊的一整段推理也很有趣
(雖然我重看後感覺有點變來變去的感覺,覺得老黃一開始沒設定好
所以改來改去)
老黃要不要考慮把大綱定完整一點再來寫長篇阿
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