[討論] 其實這次會這樣爭議是因為沒旁白吧?
想當初嵌合蟻篇輔佐大量旁白
各個角色間的戰鬥都用上帝視角解釋得很清楚
不過這次是完全西索觀點,大部分時間都在猜測
所以才會有很大爭議(不然至少也要補上團長OS)
例如要是沒上帝旁白而用會長視角去看蟻王
讀者可能根本不知道為何超高速的攻擊最後會被蟻王閃過
還有尤匹慢慢能控制怒氣甚至來誘敵的經過也會不明白
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還不夠 至少要把團長用的步數都解釋到位 蟻篇就是這樣的
※ 編輯: Sinreigensou (220.130.36.2), 06/13/2016 13:46:34
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