Re: [閒聊] 富間又休刊 有雷 不喜勿入
※ 引述《YoWTF (Hey,What the Fuck?)》之銘言:
: 是為了 去取材 換點新的梗嗎@@?
: 還是感覺 獵人最全盛時期是在貪婪之島的時候...
: 現在的畫風也越來越...
: 不知道有沒有人這樣認為?
富奸還是休刊好了 最近畫的選舉和阿魯卡都很難看
選舉和阿魯卡2條線雖然是同時發生但是畫清界限在演的
試問 小崗是神龍救活的 協會沒有人去調查過神龍這號人物
哪來副會長神之預測能知道小崗會出現....選舉線的心得 看了等於白看
而阿魯卡線也很機車前面說一大堆願望和強求的恐怖如雪球
但後來演的完全不是這麼一回事 劇情有爆點又收不了
桐梧、清凜隊那些 伊、西2人組高調殺害 沒半個人敢吭一聲 離普至極
只是為了不讓這2條線有交集到
整個劇情 乾脆全演相信我之術好了
金「相信小崗不會死」
鼠「相信小崗會來會場」
讀者「相信奇犽能無償對神龍命令」
好好的劇情能搞成這麼奇怪 每話都好像很精彩 但連貫看下來
整個故事好像都是臨時想出來的 跟以前的功力真的差太多了
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治療也可以無償 就很奇怪 前幾話治療指甲 要睡一陣子
但治療小崗 可以完全沒副作用
明明奇犽在小崗床前就在解釋 阿魯卡與不明物出現時間關係
..只能說作者是想轉彎就轉彎 不但沒有先架構好阿魯卡能力的極限
還在幾話後 使出瞬移打臉
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※ 編輯: goswiming 來自: 114.32.226.97 (03/21 21:17)
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劇情都是繞著不明確的東西在打轉
像副會長的心思 阿魯卡複雜的能力
雖然這樣描寫很容易吸引到讀者想看下去
但少了很重要的東西...
所有出現過線索合併在一起的合理性不能太差
※ 編輯: goswiming 來自: 114.32.226.97 (03/21 21:34)
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而富奸現在己經習慣畫一畫就跳出那個框架
想弄出讓人想不到的收法為樂
所以現在看到外側世界那麼多新奇事物 不會是個晃子吧
演了半天到時又不是那麼一回事 實在讓人擔憂
※ 編輯: goswiming 來自: 114.32.226.97 (03/21 21:39)
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