[討論] 想聽聽大家的想法
大家好,
我有一位朋友害羞不敢發文,
但是又很想知道自己寫的歌給人的感覺是什麼
所以我就義氣相挺,
犧牲自己的帳號來將這首屁屁的歌放上來,
請笑納
對惹:歌是關於一個騎腳踏車上班的小故事
https://youtu.be/94TnBef4UIs
歐對了,他本人說他這次挑戰整首雙韻到底,試問效果如何?
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※ 編輯: n81229 (223.140.146.117), 08/13/2017 13:02:42
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他覺得同樣雙韻腳然後都不用重複的詞好像會很有挑戰,所以這樣會容易感到單調唷?
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