[KUSO] 我自己的小小創作>////<
很短....
唉唷喂~~我知道背景音樂剪的沒有很好^///^
請大家笑納了
歡迎批評指教!!謝謝大家
http://www.wretch.cc/blog/kidding427/15946163
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Oops~首先小女子先感謝大大們的指教^^
沒想到原來大家似乎都是對歌詞頗有微詞= =a
抱歉抱歉應該先標明是十八禁歌詞
這只是十幾分鐘寫出來的即興小品, 我和主角討論過了, 內容確實還不夠豐富
不過.....國內外很多rapper的詞也是很十八禁的阿~"~
呵, 以前我大多寫比較hardcore的東東, 第一次嘗試dirty的風格
不過還是再次謝謝大家的指教!!
peace
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