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這題是我現在最不懂題目到底想要我回答什麼的
The following is a letter to the editor of an environmental magazine.
“The decline in the numbers of amphibians worldwide clearly indicates
the global pollution of water and air. Two studies of amphibians in
Yosemite National Park in California confirm my conclusion. In 1915
there were seven species of amphibians in the park, and there were
abundant numbers of each species. However, in 1992 there were only
four species of amphibians observed in the park, and the numbers of
each species were drastically reduced. The decline in Yosemite has
been blamed on the introduction of trout into the park’s waters,
which began in 1920 (trout are known to eat amphibian eggs).
But the introduction of trout cannot be the real reason for the
Yosemite decline because it does not explain the worldwide decline.”
我一開始想到
1.本文不應該用單一國家公園去推全世界
2.兩份調查時間相差過久 時空背景有差 不應拿來討論
在看完範文後
範文內有提到從amphibians減少的原因去寫
如果是板上的大家會怎麼去寫這題
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