docs/92826: [patch] Punctuation and grammar fix for article "hat
>Number: 92826
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: [patch] Punctuation and grammar fix for article "hats"
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Sat Feb 04 22:20:02 GMT 2006
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Alec Berryman
>Release: FreeBSD 6.0-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD shredder.bowdoin.edu 6.0-STABLE FreeBSD 6.0-STABLE #0: Sat Jan 21 01:26:30 EST 2006 root@shredder.bowdoin.edu:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/SERVER i386
>Description:
Missing a period between sentences and subject/verb mismatch.
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
--- hats-punctuation-grammer.diff begins here ---
Index: article.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/hats/article.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.8
diff -u -r1.8 article.sgml
--- article.sgml 8 Aug 2004 13:43:55 -0000 1.8
+++ article.sgml 4 Feb 2006 21:59:44 -0000
@@ -79,11 +79,11 @@
<para>Hats are answerable to core. If they are doing good jobs,
core will leave them alone. If they are doing a bad job, core has
the option to remove them. Hats are expected to work with core if
- core has issues with their performance of their duties They serve
+ core has issues with their performance of their duties. They serve
at the pleasure of core.</para>
<para>Core sometimes will impose additional, specific requirements
- for a given hat that does not apply to all hats. These conditions
+ for a given hat that do not apply to all hats. These conditions
may change over time.</para>
<para>Committers and others working with hats are expected to use
--- hats-punctuation-grammer.diff ends here ---
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
>Unformatted:
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