[課業] 作文長篇白話v.s短篇言之有物之分數高低?
覺得自己寫作文時構思太久,寫字又太慢,雖寫的切題又言之有物,
但只寫二頁多一點,草草結束沒寫完,分數也只有二十多。 如果不
花太多時間構思及擬第一段草稿,在切題的前提下通篇白話並引用事
例充篇幅,盡量寫到第四頁,分數是否會高點?
看過補習班同學交給老師批改的練習作文,通篇白話到國中生程度,
還寫了一頁多的一個故事,篇幅四頁,老師給他三十幾分,讓我看了
有點受打擊,如要那樣寫我也能寫到四頁。
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