[Talk] Hi there!

看板EngTalk作者 (hooniya)時間12年前 (2012/05/10 09:39), 編輯推噓2(202)
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Hello, my name is Hoonya, I'm 24 years old and am currently looking for a job, so I'm spending a huge amount of time at home. I want to practice my English writing some more since once you graduate from school, you don't really have any chance to write in English unless your job requires you to, which is pretty sad since I don't want to find a job only because it needs you to be able to write emails or fill in forms in English. Well it's nice meeting people who also like to write in Englsih. I do like to have someone checking my grammar and vocabulary from time to time, so please feel free to point out my mistakes ;) -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 109.246.27.216

05/10 16:28, , 1F
you can use one instead of you at the third line.
05/10 16:28, 1F

05/10 16:29, , 2F
or people because the first subject is I and jump
05/10 16:29, 2F

05/10 16:29, , 3F
to you may comfuse people.
05/10 16:29, 3F

05/10 16:33, , 4F
unless your job requires you to do so.
05/10 16:33, 4F
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