[Talk] so bad

看板EngTalk作者 (頹廢)時間14年前 (2012/03/25 21:56), 編輯推噓3(306)
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i forgot my smart cell phone in my pants pocket, and i took them to the washer .. when i suddenly thought of it , but it was too late i'm very sad now.. :( p.s my grammar is bad, so everybody can correct me -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 111.252.75.232

03/26 14:22, , 1F
I think you have one cell phone, so "them" is wrong
03/26 14:22, 1F

03/26 14:28, , 2F
"when" and "but" are both conjunction,so "but" can
03/26 14:28, 2F

03/26 14:28, , 3F
be omitted.
03/26 14:28, 3F

03/28 10:24, , 4F
Maybe "them" means phone and pants?
03/28 10:24, 4F

03/28 19:08, , 5F
It's time to get a new one~~~ iphone 4s~~~
03/28 19:08, 5F

03/28 22:49, , 6F
yes,"them" are phone and pants
03/28 22:49, 6F

03/28 22:50, , 7F
and thanks hsh for answer my false
03/28 22:50, 7F

03/28 22:51, , 8F
iphone 4s. it's too expensive :((
03/28 22:51, 8F

04/01 01:59, , 9F
sorry, I forgot "them" including pants, haha.
04/01 01:59, 9F
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