[Ask ] English sentence

看板EngTalk作者 (Xray)時間12年前 (2011/08/06 02:56), 編輯推噓2(2推 0噓 2→)
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sorry everybody! my english is poor so i have a question about the english sentence. "I hopefully this suitcase to bring good luck for your trip and happy birthday." Is there any problem with this sentence? -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 58.115.17.64
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08/06 04:31, , 1F
I hope this suitcase will bring you good luck for
08/06 04:31, 1F
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08/06 04:32, , 2F
your trip, and happy birthday!
08/06 04:32, 2F
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08/06 09:34, , 3F
thank you~
08/06 09:34, 3F
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08/16 19:03, , 4F
better use "I wish".
08/16 19:03, 4F
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