[請益] 英文自傳請益已刪文

看板Eng-Class作者 (qq)時間6年前 (2019/10/02 21:36), 編輯推噓1(103)
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各位大大好, 小弟英文程度不適很好, 寫了一篇英文自傳, 但不確定文法或內容有問題 能否請各位大大幫我確認一下, 謝謝 (公司名稱或比較隱私的資訊用xxx替代) My name is xxx. I am thirty years old, live with my family in xxx. There are five people in my family. I graduated from xxx University with the Master degree of xxx . I worked as an Equipment Engineer for xxx. My major task was maintained equipment make sure the operation of machine smoothly and improved productivity. We worked with Product Development Department, improving the process of gold wire to achieve a cost reduction of 15% and increase the product yield. We also worked with Testing Department, analyzing abnormal products and offering solutions to improve product yield. This work experience helped me to understand the semiconductor industry and familiar with industrial production process and cultivate the ability to analyze and solve problems. After I left xxx, I joined to xxx. I worked in the department of process integration and I was a member of the xxx project. My main responsibilities include project management of New Product Introduction, established process flow and specifications, set up reliability testing. I am responsible for three projects and all met customer requirement. While I worked in the process integration department, I can have a thorough overview on semiconductor process technologies. Cross-departmental collaboration and teamwork let me understand the importance of communication. I'm very frank and have a strong sense of responsibility. I always work hard to complete what my supervisor has assigned me. I am eager to face every new challenge, and I would like to work in a company which I admire and where I feel a sense of belonging. Thank you for your time and consideration. I am really looking forward to being a part of your company. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 36.235.62.182 (臺灣) ※ 文章網址: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/Eng-Class/M.1570023370.A.7BE.html

10/02 21:57, 6年前 , 1F
是啦乾
10/02 21:57, 1F

10/02 22:20, 6年前 , 2F
跟家人住那一段不用提吧
10/02 22:20, 2F

10/02 23:21, 6年前 , 3F
別拿兒童美語那套當工作自介…
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10/02 23:22, 6年前 , 4F
避免用we…
10/02 23:22, 4F
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