[請益] 要寫一段標語的英文 求改錯

看板Eng-Class作者 (shirley)時間9年前 (2017/01/10 23:49), 編輯推噓0(009)
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Now please come to office and confirm the date that you can do a physical examination,if you failure to do so,the physical examination will be conducted according to original schedule and the date cannot be changed again later. If you insist to change the date ,you will have to pay by yourself to go to hospital. 現在請到辦公室來確認可以體檢的日期,如果沒來確認,體檢就會照原定日期執行,日後 無法更動日期。如果之後執意要改日期,那就要自己花交通費到醫院去檢查。 上面這段英文是工作要用的 求版上高手修改...感謝 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 223.26.91.62 ※ 文章網址: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/Eng-Class/M.1484063393.A.9A7.html

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Please come to the office before (時間) to check the
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date that you can do a physical examination before (
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時間), or we will follow the original schedule. The
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date cannot be changed afterward, and if you insist
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to do so, you have to go to the hospital in person
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and pay the transportation(transport?) cost by
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yourself. Thank you for cooperation.
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examination後面的before(時間)是多打的
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不專業建議,請自行斟酌參考
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