[求譯] 請幫我檢查英文自我介紹 研究所用
如題
本人最近才重新認真自學英文，程度上還不大能分辨句子對錯，
研究所推甄時間又快到了，需要一些簡單的自我介紹，
請大家幫我看看是否有改善的空間。
教授好,我的名字是Aaron,我今年21歲，出生於屏東，目前就讀XX大學，
企業管理學系四年級，我在學校主修財務管理及行銷，我的興趣是讀書、看電影跟游泳，
我的家庭成員有五位，我爸、我媽、我妹妹們和我，我父親是商人，母親是家庭主婦，
兩個妹妹是學生。
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Hi porfessor,my name is Aaron, I'm 21 years old,born in Pingtung,
currently studying at XXX,Department of Business Management the senior grade,
I major in Financial Management and Marketing.
My hobby includes reading, watching movies and swimming.
There are five members in my family,my father,my mother, my sisters,and me,
my father is a businessman, my mother is a housekeeper,
my two sisters are students.
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