[請益] 這個句子太複雜太長,能幫我簡化嗎
我看到一個範文好長好複雜
我自己沒辦法吸收活用更不想硬背
能不能請大大在維持原意的前提下
把這個句子改得簡單一點?(但盡量使用二個句子)
謝謝幫忙喔!
While many parents restrict their children’s freedom to
play in local parks considering the rising crime rates and
nearly all households have at least one television set, TV
viewing has occupied countless hours of their leisure time.
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