[請益] 托福作文該多用名詞句還是動詞句？
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最近上一個托福作文班，老師是個老外，他說英文句子可分為兩種
nominal sentence 和 verbal sentence
差別就像以下的兩句：
Nominal: Lincoln's hope was for the preservation of the Union without war, but the South's attack on Fort Sumter made war an inevitability.
Verbal: Lincoln hoped to preserve the Union without war, but the South attacked Fort Sumter, making war inevitable.
他說好文章應該多用Verbal sentence，我自己也是覺得Verbal讀起來較容易理解
但是我上網查了一下，發現有意見提到語言考試應該多用名詞句，真正要鍛練英文寫作才用動詞句
我目前的目標只是托福能拿4~5分，那是不是該多用名詞句呢？
而且名詞句的好處很明顯...字數比較多xD
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