[請益] Keep sentences short and simple秘訣
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現在在上一門英文課程
英文老師是說要把下面句子進行以下Rule
"Keep sentences short and simple in structure and use everyday words."
有沒有什麼祕訣和方向呢~~~
比較少遇到這類題目...QQ
1.This change will allow us to better leverage our talent base in an
area where the developmental roles are under way and strategically
focuses us toward the upcoming business system transition where
systems literacy and accuracy will be essential to maintain and to
further improve service levels to our customer base going forward.
2.It is of considerable importance for the author to bear in mind,
in connection with the devising of a formal written document intended
for information or persuasion, that the use of clarity in the selection
of vocabulary and syntax will have a substantial influence on the document,
particularyly in its asociation with the rapidity of interpretation and
degree of comprehension.
大恩大德 感激不盡 <(_ _)>
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