[文法] 請問這個句子是不是文法錯誤？

看板Eng-Class作者 (簡潔俐落)時間8年前 (2016/04/06 09:12), 編輯推噓2(2推 0噓 9→)
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Furthermore,the air quality in cities is often poor, due to pollution from traffic, and the streets and public transport systems are usually overcrowded. 在我知識範圍內（雖然很小） due to是介詞 不能直接加上主詞(pollution + systems)和動詞(are) 應該用連接詞because才對 是句子錯還是我錯了？ -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 114.35.36.92 ※ 文章網址: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/Eng-Class/M.1459905143.A.7ED.html
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04/06 09:34, , 1F
and the streets and public transport s
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ystems are usually overcrowded 這句是
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另一個完整的子句 and太多非常干擾
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04/06 10:09, , 4F
原來不是錯誤。謝謝，我看懂了！
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04/07 03:12, , 5F
due to跟because of可以互相替換意思差不多。這兩個後面
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都是接原因，所以這句裡面pollution from traffic就是這
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個"原因"，要把它們看成一組而非分開的三個詞。
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如果是我我會這樣標點：Furthermore, the air quality in
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cities is often poor due to pollution from traffic;
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and the streets and public transport systems are usu
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ally overcrowded. 這樣看比較順。
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