[文法] 報告講稿的用字遣詞
這星期要介紹爵士樂
講稿大概是長這樣
最後一段是寫推薦海上鋼琴師這部電影
因為字彙量很少實在不知道怎麼用比較適合
字典翻了很久發現有些音樂相關的名詞實在不懂很頭痛
希望大家能幫我挑出用字或文法上的錯誤
感恩
Jazz is one style of music that originated from African American communities i
n the United States in the late 19th and early 20th centuries. In the beginnin
g, New Orleans jazz began in the early 1910s, combining earlier brass band mar
ches, French quadrilles, biguine, ragtime and blues with collective polyphonic
improvisation. This style is also affected by Blues and traditional music. Ho
wever, the real origin is from their poor live. In 1865,after American Civil
War over, the black slaves has been emancipated, but their life is still rough
. Most of them are illiteracy. The only way to entertain themselves is to crea
te their own music from their homeland. Jazz is characterize by improvisation,
strong beats, and swing. Generally, the common performance is usually basic o
n African-American style.The characteristic of this one calls “call and resp
onse “, which means a succession of two distinct phrases usually played by di
fferent musicians.The basic pattern instrument containsBrass,saxophone, and
drum. The most typical figure of Jazz IsLouis Armstrong,the greatest of all
Jazz musicians. As my experience, I recommend everyone watching this movie, Th
e Crave. There is a lot of element of Jazz in the movie. In my opinion, the ac
tion I like the most is when the two pianists compete their technique of piano
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