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Hello~ Today I will introduce the song that which is No.91 on the list -
"Goodbye Yellow Brick Road" by Elton John.
This song is released on October fifth, ninteen seventy-three. And the genre
of it is soft rock music.
The song is talking about a man that he don't want to stay the environment
that only attach importance to money and power and. He think that he won't be
constrainted by the bad value and wanna back to the farm, the original life
which don't need to worried about the money and power anymore.
I like this song because it give me a sense of Utopia. People all want to
live in the ideal state. It reflects everyone's dream clearly!
想要表達的意思:
哈摟~ 我今天要介紹的是清單上第91名的歌曲-由Elton John製作的"Goodbye
Yellow Brick Road"。
這首歌在1973/10/5被釋出。這首歌的類型屬於柔性搖滾音樂。
這首歌是在描述一個人不想再呆在一個只重視金錢和權力的地方，他認為他不應
該被束縛在這種錯誤的價值觀中，並且想要回到農田中-不用為權勢擔心的最原始生活。
我喜歡這首歌因為他給我一種烏托邦般的感覺。人們都希望生活在這裡想國度之中。這
首歌清楚的詮釋人們心中的夢想。
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