[求譯] 請教這段英譯是否正確通順？
http://tmblr.co/Zo4k0u1lF0cQh
在臉書看到國家地理雜誌的這張照片, 我覺得
「這張照片不只景色驚人, 看起來他似乎也刻意想藉著頭燈光束照射,
創造出像是彗星尾巴掃過天空的圖像。聰明！」
在臉書粉絲團留言, 請問我這樣寫正確嗎？
「Not only the view is amazing,
it also seems like he deliberately creates an image
that looks like a comet tail sweeping across the sky
with the headlight beaming through. Clever! 」
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