[請益] 子句中 比較級的關代可以省略嗎
Five years work experience at A company, (which is) more competitive than
other peers, defines my position in the X industry.
請問which is可以省略嗎?
其實我原來是寫:
Highly competitive five years work experience than other peers at A company
defines my position in the X industry.
不知道有沒有比較錯誤的問題? (work跟peers)
因為要寫在正式文件裡 希望能精簡
若版上高手有其他寫法 歡迎指正 感謝!
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