[文法] but while如何解釋?

看板Eng-Class作者 (Rackie)時間11年前 (2015/02/28 17:20), 編輯推噓1(104)
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剛剛下午我的學生問了我一個英文段落,如下: "Are you trying to lose some extra pounds so you'll look in your summer clothes? In the summer, many people decide to get fit. But while their motivation is good, their methods are not." 最後兩句: But while their motivation is good, their methods are not. but跟while不是都屬連接詞嗎? 想請問各位版友,這樣的使用是合乎文法嗎? -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 59.127.196.167 ※ 文章網址: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/Eng-Class/M.1425115220.A.9B7.html

02/28 19:42, , 1F
But their methods are not good, while their motivation
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02/28 19:42, , 2F
is.
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02/28 19:42, , 3F
你覺得這樣如何?
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02/28 19:43, , 4F
我個人會堅持原句的but後面需要逗點啦
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02/28 23:19, , 5F
這就只是一個轉折語氣而已 相較於前面一大段 "但是"當...卻
02/28 23:19, 5F
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