[請益] whether英文報告的用法

看板Eng-Class作者 (找英文家教)時間11年前 (2014/09/18 16:10), 編輯推噓0(0020)
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期刊的原文如下: First, we tested whether Vegf and Arg1 induction in macrophages is mediated by a secreted tumour-derived signal. 因為我要用英文報告, 想使用qestions and answers的方式來呈現, 所以我想在我的slide改成 Q: Whether Vegf and Arg1 induction in macrophages is mediated by a secreted tumour-derived signal. 那這最後應該用句號還是問號?(可以這樣改嗎?) 還是我應該改成 Q: If Vegf and Arg1 induction in macrophages is mediated by a secreted tumour-derived signal? 或者是用 Q: Are Vegf and Arg1 induction in macrophages mediated by a secreted tumour-derived signal? 請問各位高手哪一種表達方式會較好? 謝謝! -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 210.60.122.151 ※ 文章網址: http://www.ptt.cc/bbs/Eng-Class/M.1411027849.A.4D3.html

09/18 18:04, , 1F
通常做這種報告,在slide裡面下標題都是用肯定句先把
09/18 18:04, 1F

09/18 18:06, , 2F
結論寫出來,然後再陳述實驗方法和結果。讓聽眾先知
09/18 18:06, 2F

09/18 18:08, , 3F
道結論。例如 The induction of Vegf and Arg1 in
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09/18 18:08, , 4F
macrophases is (not 如果是否定的話) mediated by
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09/18 18:09, , 5F
a secreted tumor-derived signal.
09/18 18:09, 5F

09/18 18:10, , 6F
要用 question and answer 的方式呈現,應該是在口頭
09/18 18:10, 6F

09/18 18:10, , 7F
上去講就好了。 slide 要簡潔明瞭。
09/18 18:10, 7F

09/18 18:54, , 8F
謝謝b大的回覆喔,不過我想用第一章slide是問問題的方式
09/18 18:54, 8F

09/18 18:55, , 9F
接著下幾張slide來解釋作者用甚麼樣的方法證明他的論點
09/18 18:55, 9F

09/18 18:56, , 10F
所以沒辦法同一張slide的標題下出結論,底下用說明的方式
09/18 18:56, 10F

09/18 18:57, , 11F
另一方面,是我報告的內容太多,很怕臨場會忘記,所以預
09/18 18:57, 11F

09/18 18:57, , 12F
設whether這張詢問的slide是用念過去的方式,下幾張slide
09/18 18:57, 12F

09/18 18:58, , 13F
再用圖來說明作者的論點(另一方面我覺得這問題很重要,
09/18 18:58, 13F

09/18 18:59, , 14F
直接打出內容,臨場我比較不會因為緊張而忘掉)
09/18 18:59, 14F

09/19 08:45, , 15F
也許第三種,直接改成簡單問句,比較自然。
09/19 08:45, 15F

09/19 08:46, , 16F
Is Vegf and Arg1 induction in ... mediated by .. signal?
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09/19 21:44, , 17F
Thanks,最後我決定將原文改寫,Q:They(The authors)
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09/19 21:44, , 18F
tested whether......
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09/19 21:45, , 19F
沒有使用建議的Is Vegf and Arg1..是因為主詞太長,怕大
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09/19 21:45, , 20F
家一時不容易理解,謝謝大家的回覆
09/19 21:45, 20F
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