[文法] 履歷用詞

看板Eng-Class作者時間9年前 (2014/07/23 20:11), 編輯推噓1(1010)
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履歷用詞 我會全心投入, 此外,我還期待從此工作獲得知識 我的寫法: I would be sure to offer mine. In addition, I expect to acquire knowledge from the job. 懇請指教! 謝謝 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 111.254.53.239 ※ 文章網址: http://www.ptt.cc/bbs/Eng-Class/M.1406117470.A.2BA.html

07/23 20:38, , 1F
兩句都需要改 第一句 全心投入不要跟自己確定吧?
07/23 20:38, 1F

07/23 20:38, , 2F
I will fully devote myself to this new position.
07/23 20:38, 2F

07/23 20:39, , 3F
第二句 未發生的期待是look forward to不是expect
07/23 20:39, 3F

07/23 20:40, , 4F
原句會有這工作如果不能獲得知識會不符合我的期待之意
07/23 20:40, 4F

07/23 21:11, , 5F
感謝^^
07/23 21:11, 5F

07/25 07:29, , 6F
兩個都不是履歷用詞,該算是自傳/自薦函用詞
07/25 07:29, 6F

07/25 07:29, , 7F
1) I would/will be fully devoted [to XXX]
07/25 07:29, 7F

07/25 07:30, , 8F
2) ... I also expect to learn / look forward to
07/25 07:30, 8F

07/25 07:31, , 9F
learning from this job
07/25 07:31, 9F

07/25 07:32, , 10F
sorry 沒看到樓上 v 大已寫 fully devote myself to
07/25 07:32, 10F

07/25 07:33, , 11F
那用法完全 ok
07/25 07:33, 11F
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